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Cover Reveal + First Three Chapters! Apricots (The Gilly Diaries #2)
I’m beyond excited to share the cover of Apricots (The Gilly Diaries #2)—and invite you to read the first three chapters today! Gilly is back with her notebook, her tangerine tree, her wonderings, and her quirky truths about life, friendship, and jam. If you loved Tangerines, this next chapter in Gilly’s world will feel like coming home—with a few secrets, new branches to climb, and the quiet things that stay.
The Quiet Things That Stay
Three months have slipped by since I last opened this kind of notebook. Three whole months—enough time for everything to change, for seasons to pass, and for me to realize I’d need a whole new notebook just to explain it all—and maybe to figure out how I feel.
So instead, I thought, maybe I’ll just list the things that haven’t changed. I’ll do that now.
My mom (even though she used to be a circle and now she’s a line—I’ll explain later), Dad, Oggy, Mississippi, Odelia, Eternity, the gardener, the man with the white beard, my home, Oggy’s home, Orti—my tangerine tree—the open fields, the green river near our house, Sabigail the yanaka, Queen Lulula the dancing monkey, Neretz the cherry tree, the witch house, and the ship house. Also, the mountains—all seven of them—and the Four Seasons train. And the sunset. That hasn’t changed either.
Obviously, if most of these don’t make sense to you, it’s probably because my first diary didn’t become a famous book—and neither did I—so you never got the chance to read about them. But believe me, they were part of my life, they still are, and they always will be.
The funny thing about things that stay the same is that if you look closely—really closely—you can see they’ve moved a little too. Maybe it’s just because you moved the same amount, so it feels like you’re all standing still together, not noticing you’re drifting gently along.
So yes, Mom gave birth to my new sister, Gilma—a name Oggy made up and Mom just happened to love. And Dad can now see me every week for twenty-five minutes—not one minute more—which is also a big change. Mississippi and I talk more often now.
But while nothing is exactly like it used to be, I’m glad they’re all still around me. Because even when things shift and drift, the important things—the quiet things, the hopeful things—still feel steady.
Today I climbed Orti to say a new prayer I wrote just for Mississippi. I whispered:
Dear forest,
send Mississippi someone
who’ll make her laugh—
louder than winning at cards,
sweeter than apricot jam,
and warmer than sunlight
on a chilly morning.
Amen.Prayers feel like they reach higher when you’re sitting in a tree. I never thought about it before, but then Oggy told me about a half-girl, half-wolf who climbed high into the snowy mountains because she believed it brought her words closer to the gods’ ears.
At first, I wasn’t sure—especially because Oggy swore it was part of Greek my-tho-lo-gy, which I’m not totally sure about, since I’ve never heard that story before.
But once Oggy said it, I started to wonder.
What if there really was such a girl-wolf? And what if she had those glowing amber eyes and pointed silver-tipped ears, and sounded so wild and lonely at night when she howled at the moon?
And what if she looked a bit like me? Or woke up at night sometimes, like I do, and thought about all kinds of things?
So I thought about her more—until she felt real in my mind. So real, I didn’t want to ignore her anymore. And that’s when I started climbing Orti whenever I have an important prayer I wrote and want to say.
But I should also explain why I prayed for Mississippi in the first place, shouldn’t I? It’s a good story.
We spend more time together now—not just when she visits to play cards with Mom and Odelia and Eternity, but also when she drives me to Odelia’s house every Tuesday to see Dad, or when we wander along the path that leads to the river, or when we take her car (the only one around here) out for a drive.
Mississippi feels more like a big sister now than just Mom’s friend or an aunt.
I like it.
The other day, she told me she felt it was finally her time to find her own jam.
When she said that, I was so happy I wasn’t watching where I stepped—and my foot sank right into a dip in the path, hidden under leaves. My ankle twisted, and I tumbled forward, scraping my knees and getting dirt and bits of moss all over my clothes. But even as I sat there on the forest floor, I was still smiling—just as happy as I was before I fell.
Falling doesn’t change your mood.
As long as it’s not into muddy water.
Or brambles.
Or nettles.
Or thorn bushes. Especially not thorn bushes. Because those can swap your mood completely—from sunshine to storm clouds—faster than you can say “snukka snukka.”I have to explain two last things quickly (or is it three?) because too much explaining just makes everyone more confused. And after saying a prayer, I’d rather sit and wait quietly for it to come true than start to explain a whole tangle of things.
First, “snukka snukka” is a real sound you can hear by gently touching the nose of a yanaka. Yanakas live only in our forest, and Oggy says that without me seeing them, they wouldn’t even exist. They’re as tall as llamas, as hairy as llamas, and can spit like llamas—but they aren’t llamas at all. They’re just … yanakas.
And the other thing—“finding your own kind of jam” in our forest means finding someone who’ll love you. Romantic-kind-of-love you.
Here, everyone makes, sells, or buys jam. So nothing is more common than jam—just like nothing is more common, or more special, than wanting to find your love.
Now that I’ve explained it all, I can rest and wait for the prayer to drift up into the gods and the sky. But as I see Oggy stepping out of his house and looking this way, I know this peaceful waiting isn’t going to last long.
I Can Count Just Fine
Pickup trucks don’t rumble down our road, not usually. But from my spot on Orti’s branch, I just saw one, creaking to a halt right by Oggy’s house, and its flatbed carries six young trees.
Mr. and Mrs. Bloom spilled out their blue door, chattering with the driver, who scratched his blue cap and nodded. Mr. Bloom kept pointing to a corner of their big round gravel yard, where there’s a blue flag fluttering in the breeze.
Maybe that’s where he wants those trees to stand. Or maybe he’s just saying to the driver, Look at this—so much blue. I almost forgot green—or tangerine orange. It’s like the sky fell and painted everything.
But I can’t hear what they’re saying for real, which makes everything even more fun from up here.
What if the driver says he came here by mistake and wants to leave those beautiful six young trees with Mr. Bloom—if only he gives him directions on how to get out of here?
Or maybe he says he’s been planting trees all across the world and this is his very last stop.
Or maybe he asks if they have cookies inside, and if they do, he’ll trade six trees for one warm chocolate chip.
Just like I thought, Oggy didn’t linger with his folks. He came straight to me, his sneakers kicking up dust clouds—way more than any regular sneakers should. Of course he loves it: stomping pebbles, crunching twigs, churning dirt with every step.
I don’t mind.
Oggy’s Oggy.
I’d still like him even if he rolled down a hill made of pine needles.I slid down Orti, my sandals smacking the soil, kicking up a little dust myself—just to show him that fancy sneakers aren’t the only way to make the ground hum. Plain sandals can do it just fine.
Then I looked at him, pointed back at the driver with the blue cap, and said, “Maybe he’s telling Mr. Bloom that one of the trees is enchanted—but he forgot which one.”
Oggy went, “What are you talking about?”
But I know he knew exactly what I was talking about, so I just kept pointing at that man and asked, “What’s with the big pickup truck? Why’s it parked at your house?”
Oggy stuffed his hands in his pockets and mumbled that there are six of them.
So I said that I can see there are six. I can count pretty well.
Then he said he knows that because everybody in the forest and beyond knows I’m obsessed with counting things.
And I said, “Oh yeah, like what?”—but I really didn’t want him to start counting all the things that I count or used to count, especially not the etched hearts on Orti, because those were the most private and so I just pointed at the sky and said, “Look how blue the sky is today.”
He looked at me as if he were counting all the times I’ve done just that—changed the subject on him just because I didn’t feel comfortable enough talking about something.
Then again, I was the one who first mentioned the trees, so I asked, “Why apricots?”
And he said that there are two reasons, not one, but he’s not sure it’s time to tell me the second one.
“What’s the first?” I asked.
“It’s just my mom … Mrs. Bloom … She loves apricot jam best of all jams. So now she’ll have more to pile on her toast,” he said.
I gave him half a tangerine I’d just picked from Orti and peeled right in front of his face, and he stuffed it in his mouth. I did the same, and when our eyes met, I could almost see his thoughts—how he was super proud of knowing something I didn’t.
”I finished the tangerine, kicked some dust with my sandals, and said, “Okay, come on. Give me a hint. What’s this other secret about?
He just said that things are changing fast, and not everyone can handle that—especially not the extra sensitive, like me.
I told him I’m not extra anything and that he shouldn’t worry so much. (Obviously, that’s not extra true—but for some reason I really lost my patience right then, under my tangerine tree.)
“Come on—what’s gonna change?” I asked.
He said all he could say was that it’s something that’s going to affect everyone’s feelings—his, his parents’, and probably mine too.
I tried so hard to figure out how six apricot trees could mess with everyone’s feelings, but my brain was as empty and hollow as a joompa—a hole in a trunk.
Which is weird, because that just doesn’t happen. I’m almost never out of ideas.
Maybe the tangerine’s sweetness made my thoughts all sticky for a bit.
So I acted like I didn’t care and asked Oggy if he wanted to play Queen of Feathers—that game we made up where you throw pinecones into the river, each with a tiny feather tucked between the scales, and see which one gets carried away faster. The first to disappear around the bend wins—unless your feather falls out or sinks in the water. Then your pinecone queen loses the round. No excuses.
We played Queen of Feathers for a whole hour, until the big pickup truck finally rumbled away. Then Oggy said he had to go home because of this new secret, and that he was sorry for leaving right when he was still ahead—9 to 8.
He’d been leading 9 to 1, but then I got the right pinecones and the right feathers and almost turned the whole thing around. But this is Oggy. He can’t lose.
As he ran down the hill, the six young trees stood tall in the dirt, their naked branches swaying just a little in the breeze—like they wanted to tell me something. Maybe that thing Oggy wouldn’t share.
It felt like Mr. and Mrs. Bloom, and Oggy, and even the trees were in on it, and I was the only one left out—standing there with my sandals all dusty.
What a classic Monday.
Never mind.
Tomorrow is a Special Tuesday.
Tuesday Jam
Tuesdays are when I see Dad. We meet at Odelia’s house, because Mississippi says it’s better to pick somewhere that’s not his or mine. Odelia’s place is kind of perfect—quiet, plain, just a couple chairs and super soft light. Nothing noisy. Nothing pretending to be fancy. Except for that glass parrot in the corner that stares at you with its shiny little marble eyes. Mississippi says Odelia got it from a friend of hers on the other side of the world, and sometimes when I go there, I sort of imagine what that friend might look like—maybe covered in feathers too, and wearing rings on every finger, sitting on a windowsill with the big ocean right in front of him, all wide and loud and blue.
I don’t mind places with those super soft yellow-ish lights—I actually kind of love them. They’re nothing like the man with the white beard’s guest house, where the lights are so bright they flood everything, and you have to hold your hand above your eyes just to look around.
In our house, I think it’s kind of in the middle.
But I don’t really know what the lights were like back when my dad still lived here. Maybe they were more mellow yellow—like that pale warm butter Mom spreads on toast. Or maybe not. The few photos I have from then—mostly from the green album, and a few from the red—don’t really show it.
Light looks different in pictures anyway. Even that one from the guest house, where I’m standing with Mom and the man with the white beard, looks all soft and dim, like the lights forgot how blinding they actually were.
But I remember.
Sometimes I sit in my room, looking out at the fields and the sunset (they’re in the same direction), just letting the light fade until my room’s almost pitch-dark. Then I light a candle in the shape of a wobbly (smart) duck and stare at it, wishing every hour could feel that calm and wrapped-up.
When I’m calm, I know exactly what to do. But when my head gets all rainy, or foggy, or windy—or when my thoughts feel heavy like big hailstones—I get mixed up. I still do stuff, but later I might think … that wasn’t the best idea. I’ve noticed that writing in my notebook by candlelight makes the words dance and wiggle, like they’re happy to be born on my pages.
Today, I asked Mom if she could make a present for this Tuesday’s visit to Odelia’s—to see Dad. She said she’d make special jam—not the usual kind we get from Olaf the II, that chatty jam vendor. I got so excited! Mom’s one of the only people around here who doesn’t make or sell jam—she just buys it from Olaf. So her making jam herself, just because I asked, means it’ll be super special. For real. For me. And for Dad.
I bet while Mom makes that jam, she’ll think sweet thoughts about Dad—maybe some good memories from before. It’s got to be hard to make jam for someone without at least one tiny, sugary thought about them. I mean, maybe if she were making plain rice or eggs or even potato salad, sure—but jam has feelings. It remembers things. And when you make it, it brings all of that up.
She also said she’ll make enough for me to take to school, which made me wonder what the other kids will say. Or maybe I’ll just eat it quietly, not telling anyone it’s the most special jam in the world. That might make it even more special.
Did I even mention that I started going back to school after quite a few months away last year?
It all started after I told Mom about my night trip through the forest with Oggy and Sabigail—to see Dad, for the first time in almost a thousand sunsets. Her eyes got big (probably just like mine when I’m scared but happy all at once). Then she asked what other wild adventures I had planned for the rest of the summer.
I thought hard, and the only wild thing I could come up with wasn’t catching snake-like creatures with Oggy and Sabigail in the forest, or wrestling monkeys, or anything like that.
It was just … going back to school.
I never used to think of that as wild—and I guess most kids my age wouldn’t either—but after so much time staying home, just etching hearts into Orti every day and playing with Oggy when he got back from school, the idea felt like the wildest thing I could imagine.
Maybe because it suddenly looked so scary. Maybe even scarier than crossing the forest at night.
Going back to school. Seeing kids my age.
Or maybe seeing my dad the way he really is made the most feared thing feel a little smaller—and I was finally ready for new kinds of brave.
Last year, I stopped going to school after too many kids laughed at too many of my thoughts—sometimes all of them. Mom taught me at home. It was fun sometimes, but other times it felt kind of like living on the moon. Alone. (Which I did once—but not for long.)
Still, I was afraid to even think about going back, so I wrote a whole notebook called:
WHY I’LL NEVER GO BACK TO…
I was even too scared to write the name of the place I meant. Not on the cover. Not even inside.
The funny thing about fear is that the more time passes, the more you find yourself in that place in the middle of the woods where two roads wait, both untaken. One road whispers, Come here. The other stays silent.
The silent road always has more branches on the ground, pits, holes, thorns, nettles, brambles, and tangly vines—and even wasp nests in the trees (or under the leaves, or dangling from the dark corners). So obviously, it’s tempting to choose the other one—the smooth, easy-looking path that keeps saying, Come here, come here.
But if you pick the thorny road—the one that doesn’t call you in—a strange thing happens. You get scratched, you get bruised, you get muddy … but the deeper you go, the better you feel. You keep walking until you reach the end of that road and find a clearing in the forest (where most of the monkeys live). From the little hill there, you can see all the way to the salty lake or the faraway mountains. And it’s the best view you could ever get.
I know the thorny one is better because I’ve seen that view. And even though I had to come back, if I had to choose again—because of fear—which road to walk, I’d choose the same.
And actually … that’s what I did, when I chose to go back to school.
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Cover Reveal + First Chapter! Leo and the Crazy Genre Hotel (Leo’s Magical Journeys #2)
Ready to check back in with Leo? I’m thrilled to share the cover of Leo and the Crazy Genre Hotel, the second book in the Leo’s Magical Journeys series. Scroll down to read the first chapter—where a new town, a mysterious flyer, and one curious bookstore set Leo on a path stranger (and more magical) than he could’ve imagined.
Leo and the Crazy Genre Hotel Check-In
Leo scuffed the sidewalk with his worn sneakers, wandering aimlessly through downtown Fairhope, Alabama. He’d started near the hospital—that sprawling redbrick building still humming with the sharp sting of antiseptic—before crossing a sleepy intersection shaded by old oak trees stretching their limbs across the street. Pastel storefronts opened their eyes to the sleepy morning, and a bay breeze wandered through the streets, leaving trails of salt and magnolia fragrance behind.
His mom kept saying it was a fresh start. “Un nuevo comienzo,” but to Leo, it felt more like a book with missing chapters—he had no idea how the story was supposed to go next.
Up ahead, a large bookstore stood proudly, its wooden sign catching the morning sunlight, inviting him forward from nearly a block away.
They had been in Fairhope for exactly two weeks. Fourteen days of living squeezed tight inside a tiny apartment, high above the street. The apartment had three little bedrooms, each hardly bigger than a closet, and a kitchen so small you had to apologize if someone else walked in. But there was a porch. And the porch was something else entirely. It overflowed with climbing aster and bougainvillea, blossoms of purple and pink tumbling down like laughter, like joy, like a promise made in flowers.
“¡Madre mía, qué belleza!” his mom, Maria, had said when they first walked inside. She stood there, hands pressed gently to her heart, tired from the ten-hour drive from Athens, Georgia, staring at the flowers as if they had bloomed there just to welcome them—as if those bright petals alone could turn a strange place into home.
On their first night in Fairhope, sitting in that tiny kitchen, she cooked arepas and stirred sancocho and promised homemade buñuelos soon. She talked about the hospital, about this new job, how it was their anchor. Stability, she said, as if the word itself might hold them steady. Leo understood. He knew this was her chance—maybe their only chance—to keep from drifting away. So he nodded, smiled, did his best to look hopeful. But deep inside, Leo still felt like someone watching through a window, wondering if he’d ever find a way in.
Strolling up South Section Street, hands shoved deep in his pockets, Leo couldn’t shake the ache for Shane’s lopsided grin or those random shouts of, “Leo, come on, let’s hit the court at school!” Life felt too quiet without his best friend around.
He reached the corner and there it was—Crossroads Books, tucked comfortably between a boutique draped in delicate ironwork and a café where the tables lounged in the dappled shade of a sprawling sycamore. Above the bookstore’s entrance, a deep blue awning sagged gently, like it had seen a thousand lazy afternoons. Leo nudged the door open, and a tiny brass bell sang out, as if it had been expecting him all along.
The air shifted, softened. And then—oh, that smell. It drifted over him gently: books, old paper, freshly brewed coffee—warm, familiar, comforting. It pulled him back to their little Main Street bookstore in Athens, Georgia, where his mom would bring him when he was younger, letting him choose books in English or Spanish. Later, he’d wander in alone, just to sit and read quietly before a guitar lesson or to catch his breath after playing basketball at the court next door.
He squinted into the bright Southern sunlight that stretched through the tall front windows, the letters from the sign casting “Crossroads Books” backward onto the polished floor. He stepped across them, feeling something ease inside—a quiet, unexpected comfort, like finding something he hadn’t realized was lost.
He wandered past shelves labeled Young Adult, History, and Local Authors, recognizing familiar titles: The Hobbit and Percy Jackson. He smiled a little, remembering how Shane used to joke about them setting off with swords like Percy or following hobbits into mist-covered mountains—adventures Fairhope felt too sleepy to imagine.
Above the register, a hand-stitched banner caught his eye. It read simply:
Crossroads Books – Every Story Leads Somewhere.
He wasn’t looking for anything special—mostly just passing the time until his mom finished her shift at the hospital. After drifting a little deeper into the store, he settled into a worn leather armchair by the windows. The seat creaked softly as he sank in, stretching his legs out in front of him.
Nearby, a woman flipped through a Southern Living cookbook, chatting softly with a friend about shrimp boils and peach cobbler. Across from her, an older man wearing a faded Fairhope Pirates baseball cap stood scanning the local history shelf, tracing book spines with a finger as if hoping to spot a story he remembered.
But something was missing. Something important. Leo looked around the bookstore, searching. There were no kids—at least, not any he could see. No clusters of teenagers flipping excitedly through graphic novels, no friendly arguments over which book had been made into a better movie, no whispered jokes punctuated by bursts of laughter. Where were they, he wondered. Where did the kids his age hide in this sleepy town?
With a sigh, he reached for a book from the nearest display—a mystery novel whose cover depicted an old inn surrounded by twisted oak trees, a rusted wrought-iron gate hanging open and a silhouette of a figure on the porch. He started to read the first lines and kept reading next to the display, until he reached the end of the first chapter, which wasn’t a long one.
A shift in the air carried over the warm scent of chocolate and fresh espresso from the café tucked at the back of the store, strangely pulling him out of his thoughts about the haunted inn. His stomach decided before he could even think it through—hot chocolate sounded perfect.
He rose from the chair, crossing the shop toward the cozy café nestled in a corner. The chalkboard menu above the counter listed an array of drinks—lattes, cold brews, teas—but his eyes went straight to “Dark Chocolate Mocha” written in looping script. He ordered one, pocketing the change from his five-dollar bill, then turned to wait as the barista steamed milk behind the counter.
That’s when he noticed the corkboard on the wall, crammed with colorful flyers—babysitting ads, guitar lessons, the local chess club. Typical small-town stuff. But one flyer, its edges curled, stood out. Unlike the others, it had no phone number, no tear-off tabs—just a message that felt oddly personal, like it was meant for him.
TEENS WANTED
Summer Hotel Staff Needed – 2 Months Only
Apply In Person – Magnolia House Hotel, 12 Fairhope AvenueLeo’s gaze lingered on the flyer. A summer job could mean pitching in—lightening his mom’s load instead of just riding her coattails. A hotel gig, though? That hadn’t even blipped on his radar. He pictured pocketing his own cash, easing the strain of her long shifts. It’d be something, at least, for all she was pouring into this fresh start.
His hand grazed the flyer’s edge, a quick jitter kicking in his gut. What if they didn’t even give him the job? Or worse—what if they did, and he completely messed it up? It was the same queasy, heavy feeling he’d had right before stepping onto the stage with his guitar for the Christmas talent show in sixth grade.
But this wasn’t about music, he reminded himself. This was about doing something different. Something far outside his comfort zone.
The door jingled as someone else walked in, catching Leo off guard. He shuffled to the side, letting a woman slip past with a quick nod as she headed toward the shelves. He glanced once more at the flyer, then tugged his phone out and typed in the address for Magnolia House Hotel.
“Alright,” he muttered, sliding the phone back into his pocket. “Guess we’ll find out.”
Leo grabbed his drink and headed back to that worn leather armchair by the window, sinking in as the bookstore’s soft buzz settled over him again. The mystery novel was right where he’d left it on the table. He scooped it up, skipped ahead to the next chapter, and took a sip of his hot chocolate while he read.
The bitterness of the dark chocolate mocha lingered on his tongue, its warmth spreading through him. Outside, the world kept moving—shop doors swinging open, passersby stopping to admire the flower beds—but here, time seemed to stretch out, holding still just for a bit.
He flipped to the next page. The story’s lead—Edwin, a hotel desk clerk—was digging into some old mystery tied up in the inn’s dusty ledgers, the kind of secret that’d been buried for years. Leo took another sip of his hot chocolate. His gaze drifted up to the corkboard where that flyer still hung, pinned to the wall.
A hotel job. A hotel mystery. Weird coincidence.
By the time he reached the end of the next chapter, his cup was nearly empty, and the weight of the summer job flyer still pressed in the back of his mind. Finally, he closed the book and exhaled, rubbing his thumb over the edge of the paper cup. Maybe this was a long shot. Maybe it wasn’t. But there was only one way to find out. He tossed the cup in the trash near the door and stepped outside.
The sticky summer heat wrapped itself around him, but somehow it didn’t feel quite as heavy now. He adjusted his backpack and stepped out onto the street, weaving between shoppers drifting lazily in and out of boutiques and cafés. A couple passed by, sipping iced coffees, and an old man wearing a sunhat paused near the flower beds, squinting thoughtfully down the street. On his shirt was a bright enamel pin that said ASK ME HOW.
Leo slowed as he approached, then stopped. “Excuse me, sir,” he said. “Am I headed the right way to Magnolia House?”
The old man turned slowly, his brow furrowing. “Magnolia House?” He pressed his lips together, thinking. Then his face lit up, as if a door had opened somewhere deep inside him. “My wife and I were married there—1945, just after the war. The hotel was something special back then. Everybody in town dreamed of getting married at the Magnolia. Folks used to say it brought good luck, that it gave you a love that lasted.” His voice softened, drifting back to another time. “It was warm that day, just like this. My Mary wore blue. Said white was too ordinary.” He smiled gently. “She was right about that. She was right about most things.”
Leo shifted his backpack, but the man kept going. “Mr. Carter gave a speech, welcoming everyone—he owned the place back then. And the Calloways? They danced till midnight, even though Mrs. Calloway swore her feet would give out.” He smiled, eyes distant. “Oh, and Thomas Winslow—he made the toast. Said something about how the world had just finished a war, and now it was time to build something new. We all raised our glasses to that.”
Leo swallowed. It was like the man had been transported back in time, standing in a different version of Fairhope. He cleared his throat. “So, uh… is this the right way?”
The man blinked, his expression shifting—confused, almost startled. He looked around, as if he had just realized where he was. “It… might be,” he said slowly. Then, with a sigh, “I’m sorry, son. I don’t remember anymore.”
Leo nodded politely, offering a small smile before heading off down the street. But something about the man’s words stayed with him. He couldn’t stop imagining the Calloways dancing in a hotel he had never seen with his own eyes. He could almost hear the jazz music spilling through the ballroom, the warm hum of conversation, the clinking of glasses. The scene played out in his head like he was right there—guests moving to the music, guys in sharp suits, women in flowing dresses, laughter floating through the warm summer night. It felt so clear, so alive, like he’d just walked out of that wedding himself.
That felt strange. Too strange.
When he reached the intersection at Fairhope Avenue, the bay breeze finally found him, carrying the briny scent of water and something floral—probably gardenias from somebody’s yard nearby. He swung toward the waterfront, letting the easy downhill slope pull him along. Near the end of the avenue, he finally saw it—the Magnolia House Hotel.
It was closer to Mobile Bay than he’d thought, sitting just beyond sidewalks shaded by old oak trees draped with Spanish moss. The hotel felt friendly and comfortable, like it had relaxed into itself over the years. The warm terracotta walls looked bright in the sunshine, gently faded from years near the bay. Bright geraniums, petunias, and bougainvillea spilled from flower boxes, purple and pink petals tumbling over wrought-iron railings.
The big front lawn stretched out beneath wide oak branches, inviting and open. Under a shaded porch, a shiny brass sign caught the sunlight:
Magnolia House Hotel – Est. 1926.
Leo paused at the curb, his eyes following the curve of the arched doorway, the brass handles flashing in the light. His heart fluttered. He pushed open the door.
Cool air and a faint hint of lavender welcomed him. The lobby was a mix of polished wood and marble floors, with a wide staircase curving gracefully to the second level. Behind the counter stood a tall, broad-shouldered man, his gaze fixed on a TV showing financial graphs. Seated next to him was a woman whose face reminded Leo of his mom—same bright eyes, same warm smile. She had a book open on her lap.
She noticed him first, smiling in a way that soothed his nerves. “Well, hey there,” she said, her Southern drawl gentle. “What can I do for ya?”
Leo felt his heart pound. “Uh, I… I saw your flyer? The one about the summer job?”
Her face lit up with a genuine delight that calmed the flutter in Leo’s chest. “Now, look at that! I told Jack if I put the flyer up at Crossroads Books, we might find someone nice—and here you are.” She glanced at the man by the TV, who barely tore his eyes from the screen. “See, Jack? Didn’t I say so?”
Turning back to Leo, she offered another kind smile. “So, what’s your name, hon?”
A sudden wave of overwhelm hit him. The grand lobby—the towering facade, the gleaming floors, the quiet elegance—momentarily stole his words. He just stood there, waiting.
She raised an eyebrow. “You got a name, or do you just go by ‘Kid Who Stares’?”
Leo cleared his throat. “Leo…Leo Hernandez. My mom and I just moved here from Athens, Georgia.”
“Athens, huh?” She said. “I hear it’s a lively place. What brings y’all to Fairhope?”
He shrugged, feeling awkward again. “My mom got a new job at the hospital—she works long hours. I wanted to help out, maybe earn some money. Just…trying to do my part.”
Her eyes lit up as she stood, setting her book on the counter. Leo caught the title: Because of Winn-Dixie.
“Well, now, aren’t you just the sweetest thing?” she said. “We sure could use someone like you around here. But you know it’s only for a few weeks, right? What grade you in—seventh, eighth? Can’t have you working longer than that.”
“Got it,” Leo said, nodding slowly. “So after that, you hire somebody else?”
“Oh, no, honey,” she said, shaking her head with a soft laugh. “You’d be the last one.”
Leo scrunched up his face. “The last one? What do you mean?”
She set her book aside and leaned toward him. “I’m the one who put up that flyer. Jack over there didn’t think it was worth the trouble—he’s fixin’ to wash his hands of the whole place.”
Leo blinked, startled. “Wash his hands of it? Why?”
Missy’s smile slipped away. “This hotel’s been Jack’s family’s pride going back generations. His granddaddy—Jack the First—put it up in ’26. That’s 1926, mind you. Then his daddy took the reins. Now some fancy outfit, Mia’s Hotel Chain, wants to snatch it up, knock it down, and slap a shiny new resort in its place. Jack’s reckonin’ it’s time to let it go.”
Missy Carter let out a little sigh, shaking her head. “Funny thing, though—a couple years back, he’d have battled anybody to keep this place going. Took on the city folks and them big-shot investors too. But now…” She paused. “Now, I ain’t so sure. He’s just… different.”
“Why?” Leo asked.
She picked up the book from the counter, tapping its cover with a smile. “Now that’s a story even longer than this book, honey—and this one’s already pushin’ two hundred pages. Doubt you’ve got the patience to hear me tell it all. Speaking of patience, how old are you anyhow, Leo Hernandez?”
“I’ll be fourteen by the end of summer.”
“Well, shoot,” she said, raising an eyebrow. “Jack and I could just about have a grandkid your age by now. But don’t pay me any mind. You sure you’re set on takin’ this job?”
“Yes, ma’am,” Leo said.
She smiled again, warmer this time. “Listen to me talkin’ your ear off without even introducing myself. I’m Missy Carter.”
“Good to meet you, Missy. So… what’s the job all about?”
Missy glanced toward the man still glued to his financial charts. “Jack, honey, how about you tell this young man what he’ll be doin’?”
Jack let out a low grunt, finally pulling his eyes from the screen. “Well, kid,” he said, voice rough around the edges, “best advice I got is keep your cash close—put some into stocks, watch those charts. Play it smart with the market—”
“Jack, no!” Missy cut in. “He’s here for the front desk job, remember? The one we’re tryin’ to fill before you run off after your big city plans?”
Jack blinked, finally focusing on Leo. “Oh. Right, front desk.” He tapped the counter absently. “Simple enough—check folks in, check ’em out, keep things steady. Just make sure nobody’s hanging around when the bulldozers roll in two months from now. Can’t have guests getting flattened before their coffee’s gone cold.”
He turned back to the TV, already drifting away.
Leo took a shaky breath. Bulldozers?
“So, sugar,” Missy Carter’s voice pulled Leo back to the lobby. “What about you? Got any hobbies? Bet you’re into somethin’ interestin’.”
“Me?” Leo blinked, momentarily thrown. He shuffled on his feet. “Well, I play guitar. Basketball’s pretty cool. And I guess video games.”
“Oh, mijo plays guitar too!” came a voice out of nowhere. It startled Leo—sounding exactly like his mom for a split second—but it wasn’t Missy who’d spoken. Missy was simply smiling, pointing toward a side doorway across the lobby.
A woman popped her head out, mop in one hand, a rag tossed casually over her shoulder, a bucket resting by her feet. She had dark, wavy hair pulled into a loose ponytail, and warm, lively eyes. Her uniform was neat, though her flushed cheeks hinted she’d been busy hustling around the hotel all morning.
“¡Ay, lo siento!” she said quickly, her cheeks turning pink. “Sometimes words just pop right out of mi cabeza before I can stop them!”
Missy swung back to Leo with a grin. “No fuss, Graciela. This here’s Leo Hernandez, lookin’ to join us at the front desk. Leo, meet our one and only—truly the only—Graciela Mendoza Saavedra.”
Graciela’s face lit up with a bright, welcoming smile. “Hola, Leo. Nice to meet you. I’d shake your hand, but…” She waved the dripping mop and laughed, sending a few droplets onto the marble floor.
Leo smiled. “Nice to meet you, too.”
Graciela propped the mop against the wall, stepping closer from the hallway to join them near the front desk. “So you play guitar? ¡Qué bueno! My boy Teo is seven—he just started, but he’s already pretty good. Like his papá used to be.” Her smile softened, eyes briefly shadowed with sadness. “His father played beautifully, too… but after he left, the house went quiet. No music for a long while, until Teo picked it up recently. Now, he’s bringing the songs back home. I’m so proud.” She paused, nodding gently. “Ya sabes cómo es—hijo de tigre, sale pintado.”
“Graciela’s from Colombia,” Missy explained, leaning closer to Leo. “Sometimes you gotta twist her arm a little to get a translation.”
“She said, like father, like son,” Leo explained, his chest suddenly tight. “Or literally, a tiger’s cub is born with stripes. Just means kids often follow after their parents.” His voice softened. He understood exactly how Teo felt.
“Oh, so you speak Spanish?” Missy said, eyebrows shooting up. “Well, shoot, Graciela, we’ve gone and hired ourselves a regular interpreter!”
Leo shrugged. “My mom’s like Graciela. One word in English, two in Spanish—sometimes the other way around.”
Graciela clapped her hands together. “Ay, Dios nos mandó un muchacho para la recepción que entiende todo lo que digo. ¡Qué bendición, Missy!”
Missy smirked. “I missed most of that, but sounds like she just called you her personal miracle.”
“Kind of,” Leo said, flashing a grin, then swung his gaze to Graciela. “And about your Teo—I totally get it. I started young too. Guitar’s tough at first, but man, it’s worth it.”
“Sí,” Graciela said, nodding quickly. “You have to practice, no?”
“Yep, all the way.”
Then Graciela’s eyes shot up to the antique chandelier swaying overhead. “Oye, you hear that? That ruido—‘crujido, clac-clac’—like it’s done for! I swear, one day this thing’s going to fall and aplastar us all!”
Missy looked at Leo. “Aplastar?”
Leo whispered, “Crush us.”
They heard Graciela mimicking it again, stretching out the “cruuuu-jido” with a dramatic groan and a quick “clac-clac,” her hands flailing like she was ducking for cover.
“Oh, hush now, Graciela, it’s alright! We had that checked, honey—solid as a mule’s back. You’ve hollered about it twice already, and I’m tellin’ ya, it’s fine. That old hunk of sparkle’s staying put even if the whole place turns to dust!”
“But those ruidos—‘crujido, clac-clac’!” Graciela pressed.
“Just let ’em be, alright?” Missy said.
Graciela shrugged, glancing at Missy. “Anything else you need, jefa?”
Missy waved her off. “Not right now, honey. You go finish what you were doin’. Don’t let us hold you up.”
“Ciao!” Graciela turned to leave, then suddenly stopped and swung back around, smiling wide. “Hey, Teo—I mean, Leo! Magnolia’s a place that loves its artists. You should play for us sometime, okay?”
“Uh, yeah—sure,” Leo said, glancing with uncertainty at Missy for a clue.
Graciela leaned in closer, her voice dropping as if sharing a secret. “You’re lucky you’re at the desk, mijo. Me, I’ve got laundry, a clogged sink—y quién sabe what else waiting today. Gracias a Dios, tomorrow’s my day off!”
Missy chuckled softly. “Holy Tuesday.”
“Exacto! Mi día de descanso,” Graciela replied with a playful wink. She gave Leo a little salute. “Welcome to the crew, muchacho!”
With that, she turned and disappeared down the hall, humming a cheerful melody as her mop and bucket rattled gently behind her. Leo watched her go, feeling oddly comforted. Anyone who talked about hearing music and artists playing here didn’t seem ready to let Magnolia House go anytime soon.
Missy let out a soft sigh and glanced back. “Graciela’s our whole show ’round here—she cooks, cleans, patches folks up, chases off raccoons, fixes things with duct tape, and probably keeps that chandelier hangin’ by sheer willpower alone. Truth be told, if she took more than a few days off, Magnolia would probably tip sideways and slide right into the bay.” She caught herself, eyes widening slightly. “Oh, shoot—maybe I shouldn’t say that.”
Leo looked up toward the chandelier. “She seemed pretty worried about that thing falling.”
Missy smiled, following his gaze. “Oh, honey, Graciela worries herself silly ’bout all sorts of things. I reckon it’s mostly ’cause she’s raising Teo all by herself. Always wondering’ what’s comin’ next—his future, her future, if they’ll have enough. But when she brings him here, and he’s running around laughing, having a good ol’ time, well, she don’t fret one bit—not about him, not about that chandelier, not about nothin’. She just relaxes into herself, enjoying that sweet little moment.”
A moment of sadness flickered across her face, but before Leo could say anything, her warmth returned. “Anyhow, you said you play guitar. Jazz?”
Leo nodded. “Yeah, sometimes.”
“Pop? Rock? That sorta stuff?”
“Yep,” he said, a spark of excitement hitting him at the chance to chew on music for a bit.
Missy clapped her hands together. “Well, ain’t that somethin’! You’ll have plenty of time for all that—but not while you’re punchin’ the clock. Jack can’t stand anything that ain’t the theme music for his stock show. Believe me, I tried Taylor Swift once, and he nearly threw the radio clear out the window.” She tossed him a teasing grin. “And don’t get too excited about basketball—we got exactly one deflated ball and a hoop that leans like it’s survived about twenty hurricanes. As for video games, don’t even think about it—I catch you chasin’ Pokémon at the front desk, you’re outta here. The Magnolia takes that stuff personal, like it’s got feelings—after all, this place is pushin’ a hundred years old.”
Leo’s heart dipped a little, imagining a summer without his favorite hobbies. But Missy leaned in, dropping her voice. “Now, you see that board over there?” She pointed to a wall lined with neatly hung room keys, each paired with a paperback. “Every key’s got a book to go with it. You can read whenever you’re sitting pretty while the guests ain’t around. What d’ya think?”
A little jolt of excitement flickered in Leo’s chest as he soaked in the place. The old chandelier glinting soft, the shiny floors, that faint whiff of lavender, and the far-off hum of cicadas sneaking through the glass doors—it all hit him like something he’d known without knowing he missed it. Even the fleur-de-lis designs—carved into the wood banisters and stamped into the tiles—snagged his attention. He’d never seen so many back home, but somehow they just pulled him in deeper, making him feel like he’d stepped into a story he’d forgotten but was finally ready to remember.
“That sounds… real good. So, when can I start?”
Missy’s eyes lit up. “Why, sugar,” she said, voice soft as a hush, “you can jump right in this very minute if you’re up for it.”
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Peek Inside Tangerines: Read or Listen to the First Three Chapters
1. The Forest Between Us
My name’s Gilly, but you won’t see it again in this diary. I don’t like writing it down or saying it out loud unless I have to. Here’s why: two days before I was born, Mom told Dad she wanted to name me Gilly. Dad had another name in mind. They argued and didn’t speak for those two days. Mom got so upset, she went into labor early—two months early. And that’s how I ended up with her name choice.
Mom says I’m making it up (I do make up lots of stories, to be fair) and that her being sad and me being born early aren’t connected. But I don’t buy it. I also think Dad, who lives on the other side of the forest, about a night’s walk from our house, still doesn’t like my name.
Mom won’t tell me what name Dad wanted to give me, not even a hint. I could promise to water every single flower in our garden for a hundred hearts on Orti (that’s our tangerine tree), and she’d still keep it a secret.
Because she doesn’t tell me, and because I think about Dad every day—pretty much the whole time it takes the sun to drop from the sky—I came up with another name for myself. It’s not really a secret, but no one else knows it. It’s the kind of sweet name I bet Dad would’ve picked for me.
One day, I’ll see Dad again. I’ll tell him the new name I came up with, and he’ll smile. The argument he had with Mom will be over, and everything in our forest will feel right again. I hope that day comes soon.
And sometimes I wonder—what if the new name I came up with is the exact same one Dad had in mind all these years? Wouldn’t that be the most incredible surprise?
I need to tell you more about me and my life. You already know my name, that I have a few secrets, and that we have a special tangerine tree in our backyard covered in little hearts I carved myself. You also know my family can switch from super happy to super sad in no time. But there’s a lot more to my story than that, and I capture it all in my diary.
I write in it every day (it’s just a plain notebook with drawings of animals and plants I’ve doodled on the cover). I don’t write too much, though, because I’m convinced my pencils have tiny souls, and they need breaks, or else they snap—kind of like some people I know. So, between entries, I draw animals or flowers or sometimes just leave a little blank space.
One day, when the time feels right and Orti drops all its tangerines, I’m going to turn my diary into a real book. I’ll edit and proofread it (two fancy words Mom taught me—she likes to write too) and split the entries into short chapters, about 683 words each. I’ll pick 683 because it’s my lucky number. Once, I tried counting all the tangerines on Orti’s branches, but a squirrel came to sit with me. We ended up playing a staring game, trying not to laugh. I won, but I completely lost track of my count. After that, we both decided to call it 683.
I think the book will need about fifty chapters, because real books always have chapters, and I want my notebook diaries to feel like a real book more than anything. I don’t know who will read it—maybe kids my age, their parents, or even grandparents. And if they have any witches in their family, I really hope they’ll read it too!
When I turn my diary into a book, I’ll make sure this very page goes right at the beginning, where it belongs—even though I’m writing it long after most of the notebook is filled. That’s part of what Mom calls the magic of editing. But enough about that for now. I think my pencil needs a break for today.
2. The Wednesday Ritual
Once, when we had tangerines, I’d peel them and drop the peels along the path, just in case I got lost. Someone could always follow the trail and find me.
Orange is my favorite color.
Once, when we had sweaters, I wasn’t cold.
Every night before bed, I say my prayers. I’ve written more than ten of them in my notebook. Mom helped a little, but I came up with the words myself and memorized each one.
Mom says I shouldn’t say “once when” for things that will come back, like tangerines or sweaters. But I think it fits. Just because something’s supposed to return doesn’t mean it feels like it will. Like rain—it used to fall all the time. Now, there is no rain. Mom says it’ll be back, but for now, it feels like another “once when” to me.
Mom and her friends trust nature, but I’m not so sure. I trust Orti, of course, and the river—it’s just a short, easy barefoot walk from our house. I trust the ants and most of the birds, too. But I don’t trust thunder or those heavy clouds, especially the ones that creep in at night when you can’t even see them.
Mom’s friends have funny names: Odelia, Mississippi, and Eternity. I have no idea who named Mississippi. Once, when I got lost, she was the one who found me and brought me back home. I remember Mom telling her she didn’t know what to do with a girl who’s always getting lost.
Now, there isn’t a single tangerine anywhere around here.
Dad taught me how to peel tangerines. Every time I peel one, I think of him—how tall he is and the warmth of his hands. He showed me the right way when we lived in a different place, a strange mix of desert and oasis. He moved here first, and then we followed. That’s when Mom’s new friends—Mississippi, Odelia, and Eternity—started visiting.
Mississippi has a thin, buzzy voice. When she talks about her trips around the country, she gets so excited, like they’re the most important adventures anyone’s ever had. I don’t know why, but once I start thinking about Mississippi, it’s hard to stop.
Mississippi has one black tooth and a lot of white ones. She’s short and beautiful. Once, when I got lost in the woods, she found me and brought me home. After Dad left us—one Thursday, just as the sun was setting—she started living with him.
I was standing on the porch when Dad came to kiss me. He hugged me, and we both cried. I clung to his sleeve, not wanting to let go. A moment later, Mom came out and hugged me too. That evening, Dad left.
What I remember most is him being sick for a long time—probably because he had to leave us. Mom kept telling him he was getting worse. So eventually, he went.
When I’m sick, I have to stay in bed.
Now Dad lives with Mississippi on the other side of the forest. Mississippi and Mom are still friends.
Orti is our tangerine tree. I’ve given names to all the trees around our house, and I remember every one of them. Since the day Dad left, I’ve gone out to the yard every day and carved a heart into Orti’s trunk. If you ever see a tree covered in tiny hearts all the way up to where its leaves begin to drape, you’ll know that’s my Orti.
Orti is as tall as six or seven yanakas stacked on top of each other, but it’s still not the tallest fruit tree in our yard.
But I didn’t explain what yanakas are. I’ll try to do it later, because yanakas always love getting more attention than just a passing mention.
Sometimes Mississippi comes over from the other side of the forest and brings photos. She and Mom never talk about Dad. Every time she visits, always on a Wednesday, she squeaks about everything—places she’s been, things she’s seen—but never about him.
Odelia and Eternity show up too, either right before or right after Mississippi, but it’s always on the same day.
When Mom’s friends visit, they play cards. They start as soon as the sun sets—Mississippi says it’s too warm to play before that—and one time, they kept going until the sun came up.
Mom usually wins, which makes sense to me—she’s my mom, after all. Odelia and Eternity don’t mind losing, but Mississippi? Not a chance. When she loses, she gets so mad she flings all her cards into the air. When that happens, the game has to pause until she calms down.
3. The Lost Family
Our forest has rabbits, snakes, little monkeys, and lots and lots of yanakas. I can’t really explain what kind of animal the yanaka is, but there are many of them in our forest. Since I didn’t know its real name and Mom said she had never seen one, I gave it a name myself.
I’m not scared of the yanakas, but I don’t get too close to them either.
I like the color green, but I really like orange more. You can trust me on these two colors because I usually don’t lie, and I almost never lie to people I don’t know.
The people I know are my dad, my mom, Mississippi, Odelia, Eternity, the gardener (I won’t write his name—he’s half-shy, half absolutely not, and might prefer to stay a mystery), and Oggy. Oggy is easily one of the most interesting people I know.
Oggy and I are the same age. He lives nearby, in a house that isn’t bigger or smaller than ours, but it has more blue colors and more windows.
When Mississippi first saw Oggy, she said out loud that she always dreamed of having such a sweet child.
If you leave my house and turn right, you’ll get to the salt lake. If you go straight, you’ll end up in the middle of the forest. But if you turn left, you’ll probably get lost, so bring tangerines just in case.
I asked Mom where the rest of our family is (besides Dad). Like, where are my grandparents and uncles and aunts and cousins? Mom said we used to be a huge family, the biggest one, but they all left, and now it’s just me and her. I think she was joking, but her jokes are sometimes a little sad. I think what she really meant is that she wishes she knew where everyone went.
I love my mom.
“Brelli” is a word Oggy taught me. It means super excellent, like really, really good. Oggy makes up words that are better than the regular ones, and because we’re best friends, he says I can use his magic words too. So when Mom or Mississippi or Eternity or Odelia says something, I can answer back with one of Oggy’s special words, and it makes whatever I say feel even stronger.
I don’t think magic is real, but I totally believe in Oggy.
Oggy doesn’t really think the prayers I write in my notebook work, but when I pray, he still sits next to me and listens anyway.
One time, Oggy showed me how he could juggle three tangerines. I couldn’t stop watching, and he said it wasn’t magic at all, just practice.
Tangerines make everything feel extra special.
Sometimes strangers come to our house. I just hide behind Mom or pretend I’m super busy so I don’t have to talk to them.
If I lie to people I don’t know, it makes my stomach and throat feel weird, like a knot. But I can lie to Odelia and Eternity and not feel anything, probably because they’re always so busy with their own stuff and never really notice what I say. Even when I told them they were super nice and that I loved having them over, or that their shoes were amazing, or that I rode an old yanaka, they didn’t even notice I was making it all up.
I think if I ever catch a yanaka, I’ll tell it my secret name, and maybe it will take me somewhere amazing, like where everyone is waiting for me. Maybe even to the house where my dad lives.
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Chapter 1: A Slice of Something More
Leo sat alone beneath the sagging “Happy 13th Birthday, Leo!” banner. His legs swung off the edge of the old, worn-out sofa, tapping softly against the frayed cushions as if trying to drum up some excitement. A car rumbled outside, and Leo’s heart leapt, just for a moment, before it sank again when the car kept going. He tugged at a loose thread on the cushion, as if unraveling it might somehow untangle the rest of the day. It wasn’t that he needed a big crowd or a pile of gifts—he just wanted something to feel different. He sighed, wishing for something he couldn’t quite name, a slice of something more that might make today feel like it mattered.
The clock above the TV ticked past 3:30 PM. Emily, Marcus, even Sarah had all said they’d come. Maybe they were just running late, Leo thought, trying to ignore the doubt creeping in. He could still picture their smiles when he handed out the invitations—they wouldn’t forget. Not really. He kept his eyes fixed on the front door, listening for any sound that might signal their arrival: footsteps on the porch, the cheerful chatter of friends finally coming through.
The scent of pandebonos floated from the kitchen, sweet and comforting, but it couldn’t unknot the twisty feeling inside him. The ceiling fan hummed quietly, making the blue and green balloons sway in gentle agreement, as if they, too, were waiting, patient and unhurried, for something worth the wait.
“Think anyone else is coming?” Shane’s voice broke through Leo’s thoughts. He was sprawled out on the rug, his nose buried in a comic book, but Leo knew Shane wasn’t as absorbed as he looked. Shane always noticed things—like the way Leo’s eyes kept drifting to the door.
“Maybe they’re stuck in traffic or something.” He said. He tried to believe it, but his stomach felt heavy, like it knew better.
Shane looked up, squinting at Leo’s face. “Well, if they don’t show, more pandebonos for us,” he said, grinning.
Leo gave a small, crooked smile. “Yeah, I guess.”
Shane leaned forward, holding the comic up so Leo could see. His excitement was unmistakable, his eyes bright as he pointed to the illustration. “Hey, look! My dad drew this one. See how the cape looks like it’s really blowing in the wind? He’s got this style that makes everything feel alive.”
Leo glanced at the page, grateful for the distraction. The cape did seem alive, almost like you could feel the rush of air just looking at it. “That’s amazing,” he said, and he meant it.
Shane kept talking, explaining how his dad did the inking, but Leo’s gaze drifted back to the door. His stomach twisted as he counted again—three out of seven classmates had come, and two had already left. Maybe a weekday party was a bad idea. Maybe people had better things to do, or maybe they just didn’t want to be here. He tried to tell himself it didn’t matter, but the disappointment settled deep inside him, sharp and heavy, refusing to let go.
From the kitchen came the clang of pots and pans, followed by his mother’s voice calling, “It’ll be ready soon, mi amor!”
“Okay, Mamá,” Leo answered. He glanced toward the kitchen door, his heart giving a little squeeze at the sound of her voice. She was trying so hard to make today feel special, even though things hadn’t been easy since she lost her job at the diner.
Restless, Leo stood and walked over to the window, pushing back the curtain to peek outside. The street was quiet, bathed in late-afternoon sunlight. No cars pulling up. No friends rushing to the door. Only Frantic, the old neighborhood cat, lounged on their front steps. The cat blinked lazily up at him, as if to say that waiting was a fine way to spend the day, that sometimes the world moved slowly on purpose—like a gentle breeze, nudging everything into a kind of patient stillness.
“Maybe they forgot,” Leo mumbled.
“Huh?” Shane looked up. “You say something?”
Leo let the curtain drop back into place. “Nah,” he said quickly, turning back to the sofa and flopping onto it. He stared at the ceiling, trying to push away the thoughts that wouldn’t leave him alone.
Shane gave him a sympathetic look. “Hey, remember last year? It was just you, me, and that huge water balloon fight. We still had a blast.”
Leo smiled a little at the memory. “Yeah, we turned the yard into a swamp.”
“And your mom got so mad at us for tracking mud into the house,” Shane said, laughing.
Leo’s smile grew, the tight feeling in his chest easing a little.
A loud clatter sounded from the kitchen—the unmistakable clang of a metal bowl hitting the floor, followed by his mom’s tired sigh.
“Everything okay, Mamá?” Leo called.
“Sí, todo bien!” she answered, though her voice sounded anything but convincing.
Shane grinned. “Sounds like an adventure in there.”
Leo chuckled. “She’s probably wrestling with the mixer again.”
The kitchen door swung open, and there was his mother, Maria, her cheeks flushed, a dusting of flour across her forehead. She smiled at him, her eyes full of a determined light. “Leo, mi vida! I have a surprise for you.”
She held out a small cake, simple but lovely, with white frosting and bright sprinkles. “I know we said we’d keep it small this year, but I couldn’t let your birthday go by without a real cake.”
Leo’s throat tightened at the sight of it. “Mamá, you didn’t have to…”
She shook her head, her smile soft. “Ay, mijo. It’s not much, but it’s made with all my love.”
Leo blinked fast, his eyes stinging. “Thank you,” he whispered.
She reached out and squeezed his shoulder, her touch warm and steady. “Anything for you, mi amor.”
Leo gazed at the cake, its simple frosting catching the light like freshly fallen snow. It wasn’t grand or elaborate, but it was made with a kind of love that made his chest ache—a love that was warm and steady. He thought about wishes and what he might ask. Maybe he didn’t need a room full of guests or a mountain of presents. Maybe what he had right here—a mother who cared enough to bake him a cake from scratch and a friend who stayed by his side—was enough. More than enough.
A low rumble of thunder rolled in from the distance, and Leo looked out the window. Dark clouds were gathering along the horizon.
“Looks like a storm’s coming,” Shane said, following Leo’s gaze.
His mother frowned, glancing out too. Leo watched her face, noticing the crease that formed between her eyebrows. She had enough to carry already, and now it seemed even the sky wanted to add to her burdens. “I hope it waits until after dinner. Ay, por favor, que no llueva,” she whispered, her voice soft, almost like a prayer, as if she believed her words could somehow charm the clouds away.
For a moment, silence settled in the room but then, the oven timer chimed from the kitchen, and her eyes widened. “The pandebonos! I need to get them before they turn negros como la noche!” She hurried back to the kitchen, but before she could disappear, the phone rang, loud and sudden, cutting through the quiet like a jarring note.
Shane grinned, raising an eyebrow. “Whoa, it’s like we’re in a superhero movie or something—all these crazy sounds happening at once. What’s next, the sound of an explosion or maybe aliens landing?”
Another flash of lightning and a crack of thunder hit close by, and Shane went pale for a second. He looked almost like he believed he could control it, like somehow his words had summoned the storm.
Maria glanced at the ringing phone, her brow furrowing slightly. “Who could be calling the landline?” she murmured, wiping her hands on her apron as she stepped over to pick it up.
“Maybe it’s Aunt Francesca?” Leo suggested.
She picked up the receiver. “¿Hola?” Her face shifted—surprise, and then a wide smile that lit up her whole expression. “¡Javier! ¡Dios mío, es tan bueno escucharte!” She said, ‘It is so good to hear from you,’ her voice filled with joy.
Leo’s heart jumped at the name. Uncle Javier. He hadn’t seen him in years, not since Uncle Javier taught him to carve that little bear that still sat on his bookshelf.
Shane nudged him, eyes wide. “Is that him? The uncle you told me about? The one who’s been everywhere?”
Leo nodded, leaning in, trying to catch bits of the conversation. His mom’s voice flowed between Spanish and English, her words wrapping around him like a gentle breeze on a summer afternoon, calming and familiar. He caught pieces—cumpleaños, regalo, música. Birthday. Gift. Music. His pulse quickened.
Then she laughed—a bright, joyful sound. She turned to Leo, her eyes brimming with something wonderful. “He wants to talk to you, mi amor.”